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I listen to a lot of demos, and you've got more than enough skills, but like all the others, the lyrics are too repetitive. I'm waiting to hear someone who says and does something that isn't being said or done. When Nas came out, no one was doing what he was doing, same for Biggie, Tupac, Tribe Called Qwest, Jay-Z etc. I have some friends who can get you signed, but they are hesitant to get down with rappers because they want some originality. Man, you got the talent to be the next big thing, and I know this by what I've heard so far, but you don't want to be another artist that gets signed because your sound/style reminds people of someone who did it before. Your skills are incredible, the only thing you're missing is some originality. And I hope you don't take this as a diss, because you are raw, no doubt! Just want to supply a little knowledge for you. Peace!
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The song is tight man, I really like it. A couple of things: sounds like you rushed through this one. Always take your time and put out a good product, no matter what anyone else says. Also, the words (lyrics) were kind of running into each other, again, sounding like a rushed work. Lets do an experiment...I will send you a poem I wrote, and I want you to turn it into a rap. First off, take time to really read it, understand the meaning, dissect it like you back in biology taking that frog apart. You can add to it or take away from it, whatever you need to do to make it do what you want it to do. Let me know when you got it done, music and all so I can hear it. If I like it, you can keep it, no strings attached. If I think it needs work, I will let you know, but if it sucks (which I don't think it will), then I get it back and I never see it published or recorded anywhere else (work is copyrighted). Man, I think you got some mad skills, and you first have to take your time and write some good songs, and second, don't be afraid to try something different. Most people don't know this, but Tupac, although he was not the most lyrically heralded rapper, he wrote a lot based on poems he wrote (about 25 or so were published and recorded on CD). Poem is below...good luck!
Lifetime (Letter to my long lost friend)
A lifetime, it took me. To get to know you, to become your friend.
A lifetime,
for others to see in you what I saw.
A decent human being.
A lifetime, it seems,
for us growing up, to receive the breaks others were afforded...but we did.
A lifetime, you know,
for a true friend like you to come along.
Now you're gone, and still I know it will take,
A lifetime for me to stop missing you.
I miss you, man.
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dat ass gigantic cant use da word big
dat shit da truth can u listen to my song called its a fuckin rap its on my page on here or my music page www.myspace.com/301boysent i know u prolly dont even get dis sighn me gucci !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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jus wanted to show you some love
thankz 4 da add!
p.s i luv ya musiq sumbody need ta hurry up and sign yhew..
ya gurhl
*sonyanique*
I luv da song
yhew welkum boo*
Fire brah..
lold'
i liked da song.
♥sonya♥.*
um. . . its cul i lyke it i guess
I LYKE YO MUSIC ITS GREAT THEY NEED TEW TELL GUCCI ABOUT YHU
Knw dat is tight
it cold bro
alrite
aye waddup dem songz is hot....
♥jus added yhuir song ta my page
ok...i c u man i do its betta den da last..
i like that song
join muh new site jus for freaks keepitasecret.ning.comthank you
yu welcum
alright homie
Yehh, Itss kewwl/ =]
yo dog keep it up ..u already keep in touch
Itz all gud
waht song
oh
yah its a badass song...
yeah i can do that
it sound good i like it
wow ur sonq is qreatt ( :
that wat up i like the 6 song that wat gucci
yeah sure.
yeah dude. Those songs r awesome. did u sing em?
yo ill check it out
cool dude i checked it out...
i like yo song itz good
I like it. Nice beat....good lyrics.
i like it
dey r good i lyke da 1 n second one
ok
idc (i dnt care)
hell yea baby
i like it just as much as i lke u boo hit me up
yho song iz hot boo! but juz cuz people sayin it's gewd dont let it give yhu dha big head
its hot i like it can you join my pretty bytch ent crew just support and your friends to sweetheart think you.
hey do you need a singer and i got some songs for you and dou have a producer and i like them songs maybe we can make some songs on a buisness tip ya dig later
it sounds good i like the second one better
yewh welcume n no problem*
your welcome :)
I Think its Alread
awww thank yuh
dat song go off bra
this song go sooooooooooooo hard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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